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[FEEDBACK/LOGLINE] Hundred Heroics (Epic Comedy/Adventure, 2.5 pgs)

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Logline: After the apocalypse, a wandering lich takes on an adventurous young girl as his sidekick, in the hopes that she can help him rebuild his body so that he can finally die.

[First two and a half pages. Not a lot to talk about, but I just want to know if they draw you in–that’s the point of a first page, after all. Log-line could use some work, though.](https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9_g0mF7fGx8Q1JBaW1mMXJocXM/view?usp=sharing)

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